"...might as well post" Heh. Don't know about not finished, but this and bunches of your other work are just stunning. The expressions, [overdone/grown-up] clothing, the colors and yes, as others have noted, even the feet, tell long and interesting stories that photos could never hope to convey. The exhausting detail put into the skin and the increasingly rushed blur of each layer apart from the characters are a great contrast that visualize memories and dreams, between the tangible things we focused on at the time and the ethereal periphery.
They're beautiful and I can stare at them for quite a while and continue to find things I like, even after months away. I wish I had money to spend...I'd buy big prints of this and all the ones of this sort!
It may not make you money yet but I hope it does and I hope you keep sharing with us little people when it does.